Final revised products

After I had handed in my products I recieved feedback from my assessor, I then created a focus group and asked for their feedback, as well as asking individuals.
I then made changes that I thought necessary, my revised products can be seen below:

This is my improved front cover....

 

This is my improved contents page. My audience wanted "more on the page" as "it looks too blank" therefore I added more content visually- as seen across the bottom of the page. A quote insert- giving an insight into one of the articles and a speech bubble, which again gives an insight to a different article (Different is Good) through a screen shot of the text.

I also added a website (as done on the front cover) to brand the page to my magazine more.

The swirly brush behind the title brings the three main colours (grey, purple and pink) together and finishes off this page, whilst maintaining the feminine appearance and feel I was aiming for.