Happy Never After Construction

This is the article written up:

This was my original mock up article:

 

This was my mock up article. I was very pleased with the work I achieved, but thought I could improve it. I asked a focus group what their thoughts were (this group consisted of people who I would consider to be my target audience.)

 

I then redrafted my product and handed it in:

 

My assessor then gave me feedback and I also put together another focus group and asked for their opinions, both positive and critical.

 

My final product can be seen on the post 'Final Revised Poducts'